Re-working the Film Script

Here is the initial draft of the opening scene of the film script I’ve been asked to work on, posted on the author’s Tumbler account.

opening scene

The book is about a man who went back in time and this scene is set in 2005.

Please feel free to comment on this piece.

Also, if you’re feeling kind and you’re on Tumblr, you can help the author by following and sharing – he needs you – and he doesn’t post very often.


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Brodie Primrose

Director, Scriptwriter, Photographer, Actor, Comedian, Fool.

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